Croatian Fascination

The old manโ€™s hands rested on the arms of his chair, a pair of gnarled artifacts. They were more than hands; they were the legacy of a life spent in the cold, wet cathedral of British Columbia’s forests. Ned Jukic. Tree faller. Our father. The room, his East Van house filled with the smell of pine and slow-cooked pork, seemed to hold its breath around him.

Bruno, ever the bulldog, had circled back to his argument. He needed our fatherโ€™s blessing, his confirmation that the world was a brutal, simple place.

โ€œItโ€™s what you lived, Tata,โ€ Bruno said, his voice earnest. โ€œIn the woods. Itโ€™s the purest form of it. The chain breaks, the tree kicks back, the man who isnโ€™t strong enough, isnโ€™t fast enoughโ€ฆ heโ€™s gone. Itโ€™s nature. No excuses. Survival of the fittest.โ€

Nedโ€™s pale, watery eyes, set deep in a face cross-hatched with scars from flying splinters and branches, watched the fire. He was a man of few words. Words were cheap in the woods. Action was everything.

He took a slow sip of his whisky, not the rakija we drank, but good Canadian whisky. He savored it, letting Brunoโ€™s words hang in the air like wood dust after a fall.

โ€œSurvival of the fittest,โ€ he finally repeated, his voice a low gravelly rumble, like the sound of a far-off skidder. โ€œThis is what you think I learned?โ€

Bruno nodded, confident. โ€œItโ€™s what you taught us. To be tough.โ€

Ned set his glass down with a deliberate thud. โ€œI taught you to be tough. I did not teach you to be stupid.โ€ His eyes, sharp as a sawโ€™s tooth, locked onto Bruno. โ€œThe forest is not a philosophy lesson for boys in a warm room. It is a place of death. And the first thing you learn is that you are not fit. None of us are.โ€

He leaned forward, his large frame still imposing. โ€œYou think the strongest man always wins? The strongest man gets confident. He gets lazy. He misses the rot in the heartwood. The fittest man is not the one with the biggest muscles. He is the one with the sharpest eyes. The one who knows when to run. The one who listens to the man next to him, even if that man is small, or quiet, or scared.โ€

He gestured out the window toward the North Shore mountains, invisible in the rain and dark. โ€œI saw a man, big like a bear, pull a saw through a cedar like it was butter. He was strong. The fittest. He didnโ€™t see the widowmaker tangled in the canopy. It killed him. I saw a small man, a nervous man, who jumped at every crack. He was weak, by your measure. But he is alive today because he was afraid. His fear made him careful. His weakness was his strength.โ€

His gaze then shifted to Luka, on the floor, his entire being focused on the geometric perfection of his blocks.

โ€œYou look at that boy and you see a weak tree,โ€ Ned said, his voice dropping, becoming something more terrifying than a shout. โ€œI look at him and I see a man who notices things. A man who sees the patterns the rest of us are too loud to see. In the woods, he is the one you want on your side. He is the one who sees the lean of the tree you missed. He hears the creak that signals the fall.โ€

He picked up his whisky again, his wrecked hands cradling the glass with a surprising tenderness.

โ€œA logging crew is not an army of one man. It is a body. The faller is the heart. The choker setter is the nerves. The whistle punk is the voice. The weak link? There is no weak link. There is only a chain. And the chain is only as strong as the crew that cares for it.โ€

He finished the whisky in one swallow and fixed Bruno with a look that could fell a tree.

โ€œYou want to talk about fitness? About strength? The strongest thing a man can do is not break something. It is to mend something. It is to look at what is broken and see not a problem to be disposed of, but a thing to be fixed. To be cherished.โ€

He nodded toward Luka. โ€œThat is your crew, Bruno. That is your chain. You do not leave him behind. You listen for his song. Because his song might just save your life one day.โ€

Silence. The only sound was the rain and the soft click-click of Lukaโ€™s blocks.

Ned Jukic had spoken. The argument was over. The law had been laid down, not from a philosophy book, but from the woods.

The silence after our fatherโ€™s words was total, broken only by the spit of the fire and the rhythmic tick-tick-tick of Lukaโ€™s blocks finding their perfect place. Ned Jukic had laid down the law of the woods, and it was a law of community, not cruelty.

Bruno stared into his glass, chastened but not yet converted. The old ideas ran deep.

I couldnโ€™t let it rest. Not now. The clarity was too sharp, the stakes too high.

โ€œTata is right,โ€ I said, my voice cutting through the quiet. I looked at my brother, my gaze hard. โ€œBut you need to hear it in terms you think you understand, Bruno. You talk about Croatia. You want a strong Croatia. Good. So do I.โ€

I stepped into the center of the room, feeling the eyes of my family on me.

โ€œBut the Croatia we build will not be some shitty Spartan war-camp,โ€ I said, the profanity cracking through the roomโ€™s formality. โ€œIt will not be a remake of that damn *300* movie you love so much, where the king tosses a baby off a cliff because it might not hold a shield one day.โ€

Brunoโ€™s head snapped up, a defensive glare in his eyes.

โ€œThat is a pagan fantasy! A death cult!โ€ I continued, my passion giving the words heat. โ€œIs that what we are? Pagans? Are we a people who worship the state, who worship strength, above the soul? Above Christ?โ€

I pointed at the crucifix hanging on my fatherโ€™s wall, a simple, wooden thing. โ€œCroatia is a Christian country. Or have you forgotten that? The first lesson of our faith is not conquest. It is compassion.โ€

I turned and swept my arm toward Luka, a gesture of presentation, of reverence.

โ€œThe Christian model is not a weak model. It is the hardest model there is! It is easy to dispose of a broken child. It is easy to only cherish the strong. Any animal can do that. It takes a beast to leave its wounded behind. It takes a manโ€”it takes a Christianโ€”to bind up the wounds of the broken. To carry them.โ€

My voice dropped, but it lost none of its intensity.

โ€œWe are not building a war machine, Bruno. We are building a nation. A home. A republic. And a home is judged not by the strength of its strongest son, but by its care for its most vulnerable. A country that disposes of its Lukas is a country that has already lost its soul. It is a country that has sold its cross for a sword and its soul for a propaganda poster.โ€

I looked from Brunoโ€™s shocked face to my fatherโ€™s, and saw a grim approval in the old manโ€™s eyes.

โ€œI am going back to help build a republic,โ€ I said, my final word on the matter. โ€œAnd I will build it on the principle that every single Croat has worth. Not because they can hold a weapon, but because they bear the image of God. Even if that image is reflected in a different, more beautiful way.โ€

I walked over to Luka and knelt. I didnโ€™t touch his city. I just looked at it.

โ€œThis,โ€ I said softly, to everyone and no one. โ€œThis precision. This order. This is not a weakness. This is the mind that could design a cathedral, or write a symphony, or find a cure for a plague. This is what we cherish. This is Croatia. Not the cliff where we throw our children away.โ€

Constitution of Rights of the Croatian People

Preamble

We, the Croatian people, united in faith, heritage, and destiny, establish this Constitution of Rights so that no Croat, whether at home or abroad, shall ever be second-class in the land of their forefathers. We reject all forms of tyranny, dictatorship, and oppression. We choose not the Spartan model of cruelty, but the Christian model of compassion, justice, and mercy. We declare that our nation shall be a beacon of liberty, where the dignity of every Croatian soul is upheld.


Article I โ€“ Citizenship by Blood and Birth

  1. Every person of Croatian blood, whether born in the homeland or abroad, is recognized as a rightful son or daughter of Croatia.
  2. No Croat shall ever be denied citizenship, identity, or belonging in the Republic of Croatia.

Article II โ€“ Equality of All Croats

  1. All Croats, regardless of birthplace, wealth, class, or creed, are equal before God, the law, and the nation.
  2. No Croatian citizen shall be treated as second-class, nor suffer discrimination in their homeland.

Article III โ€“ Freedom of Speech and Conscience

  1. The right of free speech shall not be infringed.
  2. No Croat shall be punished for speaking truth, for defending their people, or for practicing their faith.
  3. Freedom of thought, press, assembly, and peaceful protest are guaranteed.

Article IV โ€“ Protection of the Family and the Weak

  1. The Republic shall defend the sanctity of family, marriage, and the upbringing of children.
  2. No child of Croatia, however weak or sick, shall be cast aside or abandoned. The nation shall bind their wounds, heal their sorrows, and lift them up in dignity.
  3. The elderly and infirm shall be honored, not discarded.

Article V โ€“ Faith and Morality

  1. The Republic affirms the Christian moral heritage of its people.
  2. Freedom of religion is guaranteed, but no government shall exalt cruelty, paganism, or tyranny over the law of love.

Article VI โ€“ The Right of Defense and Freedom

  1. Every Croatian has the right to defend himself, his family, and his homeland.
  2. The Republic shall never submit to foreign domination, nor permit Croats to be dispossessed of their land.

Article VII โ€“ Government of the People

  1. The government of Croatia exists only by the consent of its people, and shall serve them in humility.
  2. Power must never concentrate into dictatorship, tyranny, or oligarchy.
  3. Leaders who betray the freedoms of Croats for foreign masters or selfish gain shall be removed and judged by the people.

Article VIII โ€“ Heritage and Unity

  1. The Croatian language, culture, and history shall be preserved and taught to all generations.
  2. Croats abroad are forever part of the Republic and entitled to full rights and participation in its future.

Article IX โ€“ Justice and Law

  1. The law shall protect the weak as much as the strong, the poor as much as the rich.
  2. No man or woman shall be above the law.
  3. Punishments shall be just, never cruel or degrading.

Article X โ€“ Oath of Loyalty

Every leader of Croatia shall swear before God and people to uphold this Constitution of Rights, to bind the wounds of the broken, to defend liberty, and to never allow Croats to be treated as second-class in their own homeland.

THE BRUCE BROTHERS

Film Treatment: THE BRUCE BROTHERS

Logline: The brutal fight for Scottish independence fractures the bond between the brilliant but pragmatic King Robert the Bruce and his fiercely loyal but increasingly unhinged younger brother, Edward, forcing them to confront whether the ends of freedom can ever justify their monstrous means.

Tone: A gritty, visceral, and psychological historical drama in the vein of The Outlaw King and The King, focusing on the complex cost of leadership and the corrosive nature of war on family.

Characters:

  • ROBERT THE BRUCE (CHRIS ARMSTRONG):ย In his 40s. The King of Scots. A strategic genius and a natural leader, but weighed down by the immense moral and political burden of kingship. He is pragmatic to a fault, often making cold calculations for the greater good. His goal is a stable, independent Scotland, but the path to it is staining his soul.
  • EDWARD BRUCE (JOE JUKIC):ย Late 20s/Early 30s. Robertโ€™s younger brother. A formidable, fearless, and terrifyingly effective warrior. His loyalty to Robert and the cause is absolute, but it is fueled by a deep-seated rage and a thirst for glory that borders on the berserk. He is the unleashed id to Robertโ€™s calculating ego.
  • ELIZABETH DE BURGH (to be cast):ย Robertโ€™s wife. His emotional anchor and moral compass. Her captivity by the English is a constant source of pain and strategic weakness for Robert.
  • SIR JAMES DOUGLAS (to be cast):ย The “Black Douglas.” A loyal lieutenant to Robert. He shares Edwardโ€™s ferocity in battle but channels it with more control, serving as a contrast to Edwardโ€™s descent.
  • AYMER DE VALENCE (to be cast):ย The ruthless English commander, representing the relentless pressure of the opposition.

SYNOPSIS

ACT I: THE FRACTURED CROWN

Opening: 1306. The aftermath of Methven. Robertโ€™s army is shattered, his family and allies captured or killed. He and a handful of survivors, including a bloodied but defiant Edward, flee into the wilderness. This is not a glorious beginning but a desperate, humiliating scramble for survival. We see the core dynamic: Robert is already thinking three moves ahead, despairing at the cost. Edward sees only the insult and burns for immediate, brutal retaliation.

As Robert rebuilds his campaign through guerrilla tactics (showing the famous spider scene not as inspiration, but as a moment of grim perseverance), Edward is his most effective weapon. He takes castles with audacious, reckless assaults that Robertโ€™s more cautious commanders would never attempt. Edwardโ€™s bravery is legendary, but Robert begins to see the warning signs: a relish for violence that goes beyond necessity, a contempt for prisoners, a belief that fear is the only true currency.

The central conflict is established: Robert needs to win the peace, to be a king who can rule. Edward only knows how to win the war.

ACT II: THE HAMMER AND THE ANVIL

  1. The stunning victory atย Bannockburnย is the brothersโ€™ apex. Robertโ€™s masterful strategy sets the trap, and Edwardโ€™s ferocious command of a schiltron or the cavalry charge is the hammer that breaks the English army. They are heroes, united in triumph. Scotland is, for the moment, free.

But victory exposes their rift. Robert, now a true king, must court diplomacy. He seeks recognition from the Pope and a lasting treaty with England. Edward sees this as weakness. To him, the enemy is humiliated but not destroyed. He argues for invading England itself, for carving out a kingdom of fire and blood.

Frustrated and sidelined by Robertโ€™s politics, Edwardโ€™s violent impulses find a new outlet. He leads punitive raids into England that are so savageโ€”massacring civilians, burning crops to the bedrockโ€”that they become counterproductive, hardening English resistance and embarrassing Robertโ€™s attempts to appear a legitimate sovereign. Their arguments become explosive. Robert is trying to build a nation; Edward is only interested in destroying an enemy.

ACT III: A KINGDOM OF ASH

  1. To channel Edwardโ€™s destructive energy away from undermining his diplomacy, Robert makes a fateful decision. He supports Edwardโ€™s ambition to open a second front by invadingย Ireland, to forge a Gaelic alliance and squeeze the English from the west. Robert gives his brother an army and a title:ย High King of Ireland.

At first, it works. Edward is in his element: conquest. He wins stunning victories against overwhelming odds. But his rule is one of terror. He alienates the very Irish allies he was sent to secure through his brutality and arrogance. Reports filter back to Robert of massacres and impaled bodies lining the roads. Robert is horrified, but he is too far away and too busy securing his own borders to intervene effectively. He is complicit.

The film culminates in the Battle of Faughart (1318). Edward, outnumbered and refusing to wait for reinforcements, charges headlong into the English/Irish army. Itโ€™s not a tactical decision; itโ€™s a suicidal act of hubris. He is killed, his body hacked to pieces.

Final Scene: Robert receives the news. There is no grand eulogy. The silence in his council chamber is deafening. He looks not like a king who has lost a troublesome general, but like a brother who has lost his other halfโ€”the brutal, monstrous, but undeniably loyal part of himself that he first unleashed and then failed to control. He won his kingdom, but the cost is etched permanently on his face. The final shot is of Robert alone on a cliff, staring out at the sea towards Ireland, the weight of his crown, and his grief, finally and utterly crushing.


KEY THEMES

  • The Duality of Freedom:ย Is freedom won through statesmanship or savagery? The film argues it requires both, and that the latter inevitably corrupts the former.
  • Fraternal Bond vs. National Duty:ย The intense love and rivalry between brothers, and the tragedy when oneโ€™s duty to a nation requires the sacrifice of his brotherโ€™s soul and life.
  • The Cost of Kingship:ย Robertโ€™s arc is about the terrible loneliness of leadership and the morally compromising decisions required to build something lasting.

VISUAL STYLE

  • Gritty and Naturalistic:ย No polished armour. Mud, blood, rain, and the harsh beauty of the Scottish and Irish landscapes.
  • Intimate Battle Choreography:ย Focus on the chaotic, personal, and terrifying nature of medieval combat. The camera stays close to Robert and Edward, contrasting Robertโ€™s tactical awareness with Edwardโ€™s brutal, efficient killing.
  • Contrasting Palettes:ย Scotland is all muted greens, greys, and browns. The Irish campaign is shot with a bleaker, more desaturated palette, reflecting the doomed nature of the enterprise.

METAL GEAR 2: KASHMIR

A Treatment by Joseph C. Jukic

Logline: Aging legend Solid Snake is pulled out of retirement for one last, impossible mission: infiltrate the war-torn Himalayas to paint a nuclear missile with a laser target designator to prevent a holy apocalypse, all while wrestling with the philosophies of war, peace, and his own damned soul.

Tone: A philosophical espionage thriller meets gritty, hyper-kinetic action. Think the metaphysical weight of Metal Gear Solid 3 meets the stylish, snappy chaos of a Guy Ritchie film.

Director: Guy Ritchie
Starring:

  • Joseph C. Jukicย as Solid Snake
  • Aishwarya Rai Bachchanย as AMMA

ACT I: THE CALL TO DHARMA

OPENING: A montage of global chaos. News clips show border skirmishes between India and Pakistan escalating to a terrifying brink. The catalyst: a charismatic, enigmatic Indian guru known only as AMMA. She preaches a radical, militant Hinduism from a fortified ashram deep in the Kashmir mountains. She claims to be the Goddess Kalki, the final avatar of Vishnu, come to cleanse the world of evil (which, to her, is the entire modern world).

COLONEL CAMPBELL (via Codec, voice grim): โ€œSnake, weโ€™re not facing a nation-state. Weโ€™re facing a divine wrath made flesh. Her influence is absolute.โ€

Snake, older, wearier, but with eyes that have seen too much to ever truly rest, is found in a remote Alaskan cabin. Heโ€™s trying to forget. Otaconโ€™s plea is the one he canโ€™t refuse. AMMA has constructed “Vajra,” a monstrous successor to Metal Gear. Itโ€™s a mobile launch platform larger and more advanced than anything before, capable of traversing the Himalayan terrain and firing its payload from an impossible-to-pin-down location. She aims to launch a nuclear strike on Islamabad, triggering a full-scale nuclear exchange that will, in her words, “burn the field so a new world may grow.”

The only solution: Operation: Skypoker. A secret US “Rod from God” kinetic weapon systemโ€”a tungsten telephone pole dropped from orbitโ€”can destroy the Vajra. But it needs a laser paint on the target for terminal guidance. Snake must get inside the heart of AMMA’s fortress, find the Vajra after itโ€™s been armed and raised for launch, and paint the warhead itself.

As he gears up, Snake mutters to himself, a quote from his dog-eared copy of Marcus Aurelius’s Meditations:

โ€œThe object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane.โ€

THE INFILTRATION: Snake parachutes into the frozen, conflict-ravaged landscape of Kashmir. Ritchieโ€™s direction shines here: freeze-frames introducing packs of mercenaries (The “Kashmir Jackals”), quick-whip pans following Snakeโ€™s stealthy movements, and sharp, cynical voiceover from Snake.

He avoids patrols using classic CQC, his body complaining with every move. He quotes Sun Tzu to himself as he plans his route:

โ€œAppear at points which the enemy must hasten to defend; march swiftly to places where you are not expected.โ€

He witnesses the fanaticism of AMMAโ€™s followers firsthand. They are not just soldiers; they are zealots, believing they are enacting divine will.


ACT II: THE ILLUSION OF MAYA

INSIDE THE ASHRAM: The fortress is a bizarre blend of ancient temple and cutting-edge military tech. Snake navigates prayer halls filled with armed sadhus and server rooms humming with data. He learns AMMAโ€™s backstory through intercepted comms and data files: a figure of immense beauty and intellect, a former quantum physicist disillusioned by global corruption, who weaponized her otherworldly presence to become a living goddess.

He encounters AMMA (Aishwarya Rai Bachchan) herself, addressing her followers via hologram. Rai brings an unparalleled, ethereal intensity to the roleโ€”her iconic eyes are both profoundly compassionate and utterly terrifying. She is serenity and annihilation personified. She speaks of the coming fire not with hatred, but with a chilling, maternal pity, her voice a hypnotic blend of softness and steel. She quotes from the Bhagavad Gita:

โ€œTherefore, stand up now, and win glory! Conquer your foes, and enjoy a flourishing kingdom! I have already doomed them to destruction. Be merely the instrument of my work, O Archer.โ€

Snake, hiding in the shadows, feels a familiar dread. This isn’t about power; it’s about ideology. Itโ€™s a ghost heโ€™s fought before. He radios Otacon, his voice heavy, quoting Revelation:

โ€œAnd the fourth angel poured out his vial upon the sun; and power was given unto him to scorch men with fire.โ€

THE PAINT: The climax of Act II is a virtuoso stealth sequence. The Vajra is revealed in a massive silo carved into the mountain, being raised to the surface for launch. Snake must navigate the gantries and platforms swarming with technicians and guards. Itโ€™s a race against time as the launch countdown begins.

As he finally gets a visual on the gleaming nuclear tip of the missile, he arms the laser designator. A guard spots him. A frantic firefight erupts on the gantry high above the abyss. Ritchie uses slow-motion to highlight the brutal, close-quarters combat, contrasted with the frantic, real-time chaos. Snake is wounded but succeeds, painting the target.

Just as he finishes, AMMAโ€™s voice, calm and clear, echoes through the silo. Sheโ€™s been aware of him the entire time. She wanted a witness. She confronts him personally, not with soldiers, but with words.

THE BATTLE OF IDEAS: AMMA and Snake have a philosophical standoff. She is celestial and absolute, a vision of divine fury and grace. Snake, battered and bleeding, argues back not with eloquence, but with raw, weary experience. He doesn’t quote scripture at her; he lives it. He is the flawed, enduring soldier, the man who has seen “the end” too many times to believe in it.

He finally responds to her Gita quote with one from Proverbs, his voice a low gravel against her melodic certainty:

โ€œPride goeth before destruction, and a haughty spirit before a fall.โ€

For the first time, a flicker of doubt crosses the faces of her inner circle. They see not a demon, but a manโ€”a tired, wounded, yet unbroken man standing against their divine wrath. The seed of mutiny is planted.


ACT III: THE ROD AND THE WRATH

THE KINETIC STRIKE: High above, the Rod from God is released. AMMA, confident in her divinity, continues the launch sequence, believing no man-made weapon can touch her. The scene cuts between the descending rod, the Vajraโ€™s missile preparing to launch, Snake fighting his way out, and AMMAโ€™s followers watching the skies.

The impact is not an explosion, but an act of God. A streak of light, a sound like the sky tearing in half, and the Vajra is simply obliterated from existence, transformed into a crater of molten metal and rock. The shockwave is seismic.

THE MUTINY: The miracle AMMA promised was her survival. Her failure is absolute. Her followers, their faith shattered, see her not as Kalki, but as a mortal woman who nearly doomed them all. The mutiny is swift and brutal. Led by her former most devout disciple, they turn on her. Aishwarya Rai portrays the downfall with tragic, operatic grandeurโ€”the goddess’s mask shatters to reveal a terrifying, vulnerable, and furious woman beneath. She is overthrown not by Snake, but by the very ideology she created.

Snake watches from a ridge as the ashram consumes itself in civil war. He has no more fight left. He quotes King Davidโ€™s Psalms, a whisper lost in the Himalayan wind:

โ€œThe heathen are sunk down in the pit that they made: in the net which they hid is their own foot taken.โ€

ESCAPE & DENOUEMENT: Wounded and alone, Snake limps through the snow towards the exfiltration point. The geopolitical crisis is averted, but the human cost is immense. In the final scene, heโ€™s on a transport plane, staring at his bloodied hands. Campbell radios, offering a medal, a pension, a thank you from a world that will never know he saved it.

Snake cuts him off. He opens a well-worn copy of Shakespeare, his finger finding a line from Macbeth:

โ€œI have lived long enough: my way of life Is fall’n into the sear, the yellow leaf…โ€

He closes the book and looks out at the endless mountains below. The mission is over. But the war within him continues. Fade to black.

FINAL LINE (On Screen):
โ€œThe metal gear was destroyed. The goddess was unmade. But the weaponโ€ฆ was just a man.โ€